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One to two 50-minute sessions

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| Overview |
Martin Luther King, Jr.'s "Letter from Birmingham Jail" demonstrates
that even the smallest punctuation mark signals a stylistic decision, distinguishing
one writer from another and enabling an author to move an audience. In this
mini-lesson, students first explore Dr. King's use of semicolons and their
rhetorical significance, then apply the lesson to their own writing by searching
for ways to follow Dr. King's model and use the punctuation mark in their own
writing.
Note that while this lesson refers to the "Letter from Birmingham Jail," any
text which features rhetorically significant use of semicolons can be effective for this mini-lesson.
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| From Theory to Practice |
Years of research and anecdotal evidence demonstrate that traditional methods
of grammar
instruction simply do not work. One common
complaint about grammar instruction stems from its lack of context—its reliance,
for example, on abstract rules and bare examples. While these stark examples
clarify grammatical ideas, they fail to capture language, including its grammar
and punctuation, in action, in the real-life texts that surround us. By
incorporating
the texts that students read or compose on
their
own, this lesson highlights the thoughtful choice of the semicolon to create
rhetorical
effect in an audience, demonstrating how one author uses
the seemingly insignificant punctuation mark to express his
ideas and urges students to follow the model in their own writing. Only by exploring
language in context, written for a particular time and place, can students discern
the subtle ways that punctuation affects meaning.
This lesson plan was adapted from Angela Petit's "The Stylish Semicolon: Teaching
Punctuation
as
Rhetorical
Choice." English Journal 92.3 (January 2003): 66-72.
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| Student Objectives |
Students will
- explore the use of the semicolon in their own and others' texts.
- review the rhetorical use and significance of the semicolon.
- revise their own writing, based on the stylistic knowledge gained from their
exploration.
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| Instructional Plan |
Resources
- Martin Luther King Jr.'s "Letter from Birmingham Jail"—this
text is frequently anthologized, appearing in many student textbooks and readers.
The text is also available online; however, because the text is protected by
copyright, the definitive copies of the letter are not printable:
- "Letter from Birmingham
Jail" from the University of Pennsylvania
- Grammar Handbook, for reference
- General classroom writing supplies (board, overheads, or chart paper, notebooks
and pens/pencils, and so forth)
- Handouts of Sample Passages:
Alternately, this lesson could be completed by focusing completely on passages
that students choose from the text. If you decide on this option, these
handouts would not be necessary.
- (optional) Internet access to play the audio version of King reading his
letter
Preparation
- Students should be assigned to read the "Letter from Birmingham Jail" prior
to this class session, so that they are familiar with the text and its contents
before they begin this activity. You can make copies of the letter for your
students from the HTML site
above, or direct students to the URL for one of the sites to read the text
online.
- Ideally, students should be given time
to explore the Flash
interactive from the Martin Luther King, Jr. Papers Project. This interactive
provides audio, video, still image, and texts in an interactive timeline
which documents the highlights of Dr. King's life. Be sure to take time
to discuss the ideas from the letter and its historical context.
- Consult the "Letter
from Birmingham Jail" from the Univeristy of Pennsylvania for background information on the letter.
- Provide paper copies of the text for each student—because students
will be looking closely at the text, they should have a copy of the letter
that they can mark on (e.g., circle semicolons).
- Make copies of the handouts of the shorter
passages and the longer
passage as well as the handout of a
passage with no semicolons from
Dr. King's letter for students. Alternately, make overheads of these pages
and arrange for an overhead projector.
- If you want to play portions of Dr. King's reading of the letter for your
class, arrange for Internet access.
- Check your grammar textbook for information on semicolons, noting the pertinent
section or page number on the board for students' reference. Alternately,
you can point students to the Purdue
OWL Overview of Punctuation.
Instruction and Activities
- Ask students, working alone or in groups, to search out and circle as many semicolons
in the text as they can find. Be aware that owing to different editors, the
copies of King's letter included in many anthologies exhibit slightly different
punctuation
and phrasing. Nevertheless, these varied texts demonstrate fairly consistent
punctuation, including semicolons. If there is a pertinent question regarding
a semicolon, the copies of the letter on the Martin Luther King, Jr. Papers
Project Web site and on the King Center Web site should be considered the definitive
texts, as they are the copyright versions endorsed by the King family.
- Once students have had a chance to work through the letter, ask them to share
passages that they have found with the class.
- Pass out the handout
of sample shorter passages that use semicolons, or display
the sentences on an overhead projector. Students will use these sentences to
analyze Dr. King's punctuation in context, as the rhetorical work of an author
trying to connect with an audience that may or may not agree with his political
protest.
- Ask students to go through the sentences circling the semicolons.
- Invite students to discuss the ways that Dr. King uses the punctuation mark
in his writing by looking closely at each of the passages (or using passages
that students have identified from the letter). Questions such as these can
spur useful conversations about areas of grammar and writing related to semicolon
use—for example, parallelism, repetition, and contrast:
- Why did Dr. King use a semicolon here instead of a stronger period or a
weaker comma?
- How does this semicolon shape the meaning of its sentence, its paragraph,
the work as a whole?
- Does this semicolon help King to reach his audience? Why or why not?
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Look closely at a longer
passage from the letter. Begin by reading the passage
aloud.
- Ask students what they note about the passage. If students do not volunteer
details, the following discussion questions can lead to conversation:
- Where does Dr. King use repetition in the passage?
What is the point of the repetition?
- Where does Dr. King use semicolons in the passage? What ideas do the
semicolons join?
- Why would Dr. King choose one sentence with semicolons over two or
three short sentences?
- Where does Dr. King use short sentences in the passage? What role does
the short sentence play rhetorically?
- What overall conclusions can you draw about Dr. King's style, including
his use of sentence length and punctuation, from this passage?
- Next turn to students' own decisions about when to use the semicolon. Share
the handout of a passage
which does not use semicolons.
Begin by reading the passage aloud.
- Ask students to imagine that they are the letter's authors and to identify
places in the passage where they might insert a semicolon. Give them a few
minutes to explore the passage alone or in groups.
- After students have had sufficient time, ask them to identify places where
they would insert semicolons in the passage. Students will typically choose
more than one place. Some join the sentences beginning "A just law" and "An
unjust law"; others may choose to join the two sentences that begin "Any law."
Encourage students to share the possibilities
they have identified.
- As students share their ideas, ask them to support their choices. Discussion
can include the following questions:
- Why are these two sentences related?
- What rhetorical advantage does the author gain by linking the clauses
in the reader's mind?
- What rhetorical advantage does the author lose by abandoning the short,
abrupt stops that periods create?
- Ask students to choose a piece of writing from their writer's notebook or
another piece of writing that they are working on.
- Ask students to find one or two places in their drafts where they could
insert a semicolon. Have students circle the semicolon with a pen or mark
it with a highlighter to make it obvious.
- Allow students to work at their own pace. Circulate through the room, helping
any students who have questions or comments. If time is short, students can
revise their own texts for homework or during the next class session.
- Once students have added the semicolons, ask them to write a short reflection
in their writer's notebooks that identifies the sentences they've joined
and the reasons they selected the sentences. Encourage them to apply the
same questions that they applied to Dr. King's letter, such as the following:
Why are these two sentences related? What rhetorical advantage do I gain
by
linking the clauses in my reader's mind? What rhetorical advantage do
I lose by abandoning the short, abrupt stops that periods create?
Web Resources
- Martin Luther
King, Jr. was born in 1929.
http://www.readwritethink.org/calendar/calendar_day.asp?id=396
- Choose among additional Web and text resources as well as find links to
lesson plans and classroom activities that can be used to supplement or extend
this lesson, from the January 15 entry from ReadWriteThink calendar.
- The Martin
Luther King Papers Project at Stanford University
http://www.stanford.edu/group/King/
- The primary location for information about Dr. King, this site includes
a chronology, encyclopedia, biography, videos, lesson plans, and more. The
overseeing board for the Project is chaired by Coretta Scott King.
- Today
in History, for January 15, from the Library of Congress
http://memory.loc.gov/ammem/today/jan15.html
- The Library of Congress entry for King's birthday provides a linked overview
of King's life and the struggle for Civil Rights.
- The
Nobel Peace Prize 1964
http://www.nobel.se/peace/laureates/1964/index.html
- The Nobel Prize Web site includes the text of the committee's presentation
speech, awarding the Peace Prize to Dr. King, as well as Dr. King's Nobel
Lecture, his acceptance speech, and biographical information.
- Photo
Essay: Martin Luther King in His Own Words
http://www.time.com/time/photoessays/mlk/index.html
- This Time.com collection pairs ten photos of King with excerpts from his
writing. Each could provide a starting place for a classroom discussion of
King's carefully chosen words.
- Martin Luther King: His Greatest Triumphs
http://www.life.com/image/first/in-gallery/24541
- The Life site provides a wealth of pictures of Dr. King, including this gallery of his greatest triumphs.
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| Student Assessment/Reflections |
| Kidwatching provides the perfect assessment for this activity. As you circulate
through the room, note which students understand the concepts and which need
more practice. Provide on-the-spot help for any students who need more examples
or instruction. When students submit their notebooks, be sure to check their
reflections and the sentences that they've used semicolons in. Provide supportive
feedback for their choices. |
3 - Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies, and their understanding of textual features (e.g., sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics).
5 - Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes.
6 - Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g., spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language, and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and nonprint texts.
11 - Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative, and critical members of a variety of literacy communities.
12 - Students use spoken, written, and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g., for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information).
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