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| Overview |
In The
Way to Rainy Mountain, N. Scott Momaday links the survival of the Kiowa
people to their ability to remember, preserve, and pass on stories. Taking
the idea one step
further, Momaday models the necessity of personal involvement in the stories.
For Momaday, to make sense of and find a place in the contemporary world, one
must connect on a
personal level with the stories of one’s past.
In this assignment, students
write a three-voice narrative based on Momaday’s structure. This model
for remembering and personal involvement in folktales, mythologies, and tales
of personal heritage can be part of any study of mythology or folktales.
Lesson originally published February 2004. Revised
November 2006 by Traci
Gardner, NCTE Staff.
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| From Theory to Practice |
They say, “Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.” In
the writing classroom, however, imitation can move beyond simple flattery to
become an empowering technique which provides scaffolding for student expression.
As
Fran
Claggett,
Louann
Reid,
and
Ruth
Vinz explain, “[T]he
traditional way artists study painting is to imitate the masters. Many writers,
too, either consciously or unconsciously spend their early writing days in a
kind of apprenticeship, modeling their work on writers they admire” (25).
Kenneth M. Roemer extends this idea: “[I]f teachers select models carefully
and present them not as ‘finished words’ or ‘remote masterpieces’ but
as paradigms of dynamic processes and as hints leading to avenues of discovery,
then modeling can and will contribute significantly to contemporary composition
courses” (769). A model such as Momaday's The Way to Rainy Mountain
provides “an occasion to study and practice writing as a dynamic process
that links thinking, reading, writing and rewriting” while at the same
time providing “a useful means of increasing student motivation to discover
and experiment imaginatively with effective methods of invention” (Roemer,
770).
Further Reading
Claggett, Fran, Louann Reid, and Ruth Vinz. Recasting The Text: Inquiry-Based
Activities for Comprehending and Composing. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook, 1996.
Roemer, Kenneth M. “Inventive Modeling: Rainy Mountain's Way to
Composition.” College
English 46.8 (December 1984): 767–782.
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| Student Objectives |
Students will
- identify the underlying themes and connections in a variety of narrative
texts.
- relate personal and family memories to a cultural, ethnic, or religious
text.
- analyze model texts, using a variety of methods including graphic organizers,
to determine the author’s meaning and explore structural possibilities
for their own texts.
- faithfully retell stories from a variety of sources, using specific details and creating clear connections among the stories.
- write for a specific audience and purpose, participating in drafting,
peer review, and revising activities.
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| Instructional Plan |
Resources
Preparation
- Familiarize yourself with the mythology and folklore Web
sites used in the lesson. You may
want to narrow the choices and/or make bookmarks on the
computer browsers for the Web sites you've chosen.
Additionally, gather any library resources that students can use for the lesson.
Along with the mythology and folklore texts, include religious texts as appropriate
(e.g., the Bible, the Qu'ran, the Torah).
- Explore background information on the Kiowa people and in particular the
importance of the Dog in their daily life and spiritual stories. The entry
on Kiowa Indians from the Handbook of Texas Online and The
Texas Kiowa Indians can be used to add relevant background
information to the exploration of the examples in class.
- Ideally, students should read The Way to Rainy Mountain prior to the
writing activities in this lesson.
If students have not read The Way to Rainy Mountain, choose an
excerpt from the book to share or use the excerpt
from Chapter III, which
connects to the Model Response handout. You may want to make copies of the
section you've chosen or prepare an overhead, so that students can see the
structure of the text.
- Familiarize yourself with the Venn
Diagram of the “Talking Dogs” Chapter, or prepare a Venn Diagram
for another chapter of The Way to Rainy Mountain or the text that you've
chosen to use as an example for this lesson.
- Test the Three-Voice
Narrative Venn Diagram on your computers to familiarize
yourself with the tool and ensure that you have the Flash plug-in installed.
You can download the plug-in from the technical
support page.
- Make copies or overheads of the handouts for the lesson, or make arrangements
for students to access the resources online.
Instruction and Activities
Reading the Text
- If you read The Way to Rainy Mountain prior to this activity, provide
background information on the Kiowa people (see Preparation above) and on
the author N.
Scott Momaday, Ph.D.
- To highlight the importance of story to the Kiowa, share N.
Scott Momaday: Keeper of the Flame from the PBS documentary The West.
- Discuss
the text,
chapter by chapter or section by section, finding the common ideas or themes
that connect the sections of the text. For example, in The Way to
Rainy Mountain, explore the ways Momaday connects the idea of “coming
out” in Chapter 1 and “splitting apart” in Chapter 2.
Other common themes to consider in The Way to Rainy Mountain are
the importance of dogs, plains storms, and courage.
- You may ask students
to complete journal
entries on the reading to begin exploring the themes. Before beginning
the writing activity, students should be familiar with the general characteristics
of folklore and/or mythology based on their reading.
Session One
- Write the word “triadic” on the board or an overhead. Ask students
to discuss the meaning of the word. Students are likely to notice that the
root of the word is “triad” and to conclude that “triadic” means
having the characteristics of a triad. Depending upon their experience and
background, students may also offer the following information about the term:
- In music, a triadic
chord is a chord made up of three notes.
- In art, a triadic is three colors
equidistant on the color wheel.
- In chemistry, a triadic is an element whose valence is three, such as boron.
- Review the three-voice triadic structure Momaday uses in The Way to
Rainy Mountain.
In each chapter of the book, three
voices—the storyteller’s, the historian’s, and the author’s—tell
interrelated stories. Read the excerpt you've chosen or the
excerpt
from Chapter III aloud and
discuss the ways that the three voices combine to tell the story.
- Connect this discussion to earlier background on the importance of storytelling
to the Kiowa people. Challenge students to think about the way that Momaday
is extending the story of his people through his text.
- Share Kenneth
Roemer's description of the three voices in Momaday’s text
to provide basic descriptions of the structure that will guide students
through
the
rest of the project.
- Reread the section of Momaday’s text, asking students to listen carefully
for the three voices and to pay attention to the ways that the three voices
are woven together. Invite students to share their responses to this second
reading.
- Display the Venn
Diagram of “Talking Dogs” Chapter (or your own diagram) and
discuss the relationships and connections between the items included on the
chart.
Ask
students to discuss
any changes that they would make to the diagram. Alternately, you can use the Three-Voice
Narrative Venn Diagram, chart paper, or the board to create a diagram collaboratively.
If you create your own diagram, save or print the chart for use later in the
lesson.
- Pay particular attention to
areas where the circles of the Venn Diagram overlap, asking students to consider
what the overlaps among the topics mean for the overall chapter and the exploration
of the
theme. Students should recognize that the more overlapping items on the diagram,
the
more closely connected and interrelated the theme in the section is. This
connectivity will be a goal for their own three-voice narratives.
- Distribute The
Many Ways to Rainy Mountain Assignment and the Rubric
for Three-Voice Narrative.
- Explain the writing activity. Discuss the importance of finding personal
connections between the theme,
- Ensure that students understand the
parts of the writing activity:
- Identify a theme from the readings to focus on in their own tales.
- Find a cultural, ethnic, or religious text with the same
theme, and write a summary of it. You may choose a folktale, legend,
myth, or religious story.
- Interview an Elder who can tell a true story related in some
way to the theme.
- Write a personal response based on the theme and linking to the other
parts of their own tales.
- Combine these three writings, following the model of Momaday’s text, and
contribute the text to a printed class anthology.
- Discuss the importance of finding personal
connections among the components of the assignment: the theme, the cultural
story, the interview, adn the personal response.
Session Two
- Brainstorm a list of themes from the reading that students can use as the
focus for their own tales. To structure the session as a review of
the reading, ask students to provide examples and connections to
the text that explain or expand the themes they identify. Continue noting ideas
on the board until a range of topics is available.
- Before students begin working on their own narratives, share and discuss
three-voice student narratives that demonstrate the writing task that students
will complete
in this project.
These examples
are taken
from Kenneth Roemer's “Inventive Modeling”;
see his text for more details and examples.
- Leah
Wright’s Three-Voice Narrative
“Leah Wright’s Indian heritage and Oklahoma background allowed her to relate
easily to Momaday’s book. But the essay she wrote . . . was strongly
influenced by an agricultural tribal history that is quite different from Momaday’s
Kiowa background.” (Roemer, p. 777)
- Yukiko
Ikeda’s Three-Voice Narrative
“Yukiko Ikeda, of Shimane University in Japan, transforms Momaday’s combination
of storytelling, historical, and personal voices to create a personalized
view of a landscape significant to her.” (Roemer,
p. 769)
- Shift to working on the first part of the triadic—folktale or mythology.
You may read and discuss several folk legends or myths as a class, discussing
common themes or
morals if desired before students begin searching on their own.
- Discuss the fact that many of these stories have spiritual importance for
the people who told (and may still tell) them. Connect this significance
to the religious texts that students are familiar with.
- Have
students search the Internet or texts in the library or classroom for cultural,
ethnic, or religious stories that focus on the themes they have chosen.
Emphasize that students may choose a folktale, legend, myth, or religious
story. You can share the following Web sites with
students
as possible resources:
Encyclopedia
Mythica
Myths
from Around the World
The Big
Myth
Bulfinch’s Mythology
Folklore
and Mythology Electronic Texts
The SurLaLune
Fairy Tale Pages
Bearskin
Tales
For religious texts (e.g., the Bible, the Qu'ran, the Torah), you may have
students rely on their own personal copies or standard copies from your school
library.
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After choosing and reading their folktales, students should rewrite the stories
in their own words. This will be the first “story” of their triadic
tales.
Remind students that they can refer to the student models by Wright and
by Ikeda as
well as to the excerpt
from Chapter III as necessary.
- Encourage students to share their retellings with class members, asking for
feedback, advice, and praise.
- Students can continue work on the first part of their triadic for homework,
if necessary.
Session Three
- Discuss the concept of an “Elder.” In “Who
Is An ‘Elder’?” Lakota Elder Mathew King explains, “In
our way, the Elders give spiritual direction to
the People. The wisdom of thousands of years flows through their lips. In our
way, when we grow old, we become Elders.” The piece continues, “Every
older person in indigenous communities is hopefully an Elder within their own
family. Some are Elders to their Clans, their Tribes, their Nations; even,
at times, to the World.” For a more extensive explanation of Native American
Elders, see “What
Is an Elder? What Do Elders Do?” which explains:
Elders should be role models for everyone else. Elders should
be teachers to the grandchildren and all young people because
of their wisdom. Elders should be advisors, law-givers, dispensers
of justice. Elders should be open to everyone. Elders
should be knowledgeable in all aspects of Innu culture. Elders
should be teachers for everyone of the past history of Innu
people. Elders should be recorders of history, not only orally
but to be preserved in print. Elders should be teachers of values
important to Innu to be passed on from generation to generation.
Elders should be teachers of language and oral history.
Elders should be teachers of Innu medicine.
- Explain the next part of the project, gathering the tale for the second
part of the triadic narratives, the historian. For homework, students interview
an Elder of their family. Students can interview in person or by phone, e-mail,
or postal
mail. Ideally, a grandparent or similar older family or community member can
be interviewed. If necessary, a parent, aunt, or uncle can serve
as the Elder.
Remind students that in the Native American tradition of the Elder, the person
they interview does not strictly have to be a member of their own family—a
religious leader, community member, or special teacher can serve as an Elder
as well.
- Once students understand the activity, brainstorm questions that students
can use in their interviews. Possible questions include the following:
- Did a member of your family immigrate here from another country or another
state?
- What important myths or stories have been handed down in your family?
- What was the most significant event in your life?
- Share the Tips for
Interviews handout. Encourage students to customize the
tips for the person they will interview.
- Answer any questions and allow students the rest of the class time to continue writing and to share their progress so far in small groups.
Session Four
- Invite students to share the results of their interviews with
classmates. The interview responses may still need to be shaped into the narrative
structure modeled in the examples for this activity. Give students some class
time to continue work on their interviews before moving to the third part of
the
project.
- After you’re satisfied that students have had a chance to share the
results of their interviews, explain that students will now begin composing
a personal response, a “memory
picture” of
the retold tale and/or the storyteller, as the third part of their triadic narratives.
In this section, students link the story to a personal memory of some element
of the first and/or second parts of their triadics.
- Return to the student models by Wright and
by Ikeda and/or
to the excerpt
from Chapter III. Read the text aloud and ask students to consider the
personal connections that the author makes.
- As a group, brainstorm a list of qualities that describe a strong personal
connection in these examples. Explain that this list will guide students as
they write their own responses.
- To help students gather ideas for their personal connections, ask them to
freewrite on their experiences with the project so far. They can write about
the theme, connections to the various parts of the tale, or the process of
gathering and writing their stories.
- Once students have gathered some ideas, suggest that they begin working on
the third part of their narratives by looking at the freewriting they've just
completed for starting points. Remind students that they can refer to the student
models by Wright and
by Ikeda as
well as to the excerpt
from Chapter III as necessary while they are writing.
- Encourage students to share their retellings with class members, asking for
feedback, advice, and praise.
- Students can continue work on their triadic narratives for homework,
if necessary.
Remind students that they should have a complete draft of their narratives at
the beginning of the next session.
Session Five
- Return to the Venn
Diagram of “Talking Dogs” Chapter (or your own diagram). Review
the information that the chart displays about the story, highlighting the importance
of connections and the information in overlapping areas.
- Review the requirements for the assignment using the rubric as
well.
- If you
have not worked with the tool previously, demonstrate the Three-Voice
Narrative Venn Diagram,
showing students how to add items to the chart as well as how to print
their responses.
- Explain the peer review step of the project: students will exchange their
narratives with partners. Partners will use the Three-Voice
Narrative Venn Diagram to analyze and respond to the text. Remind students
that in addition to filling in the Venn Diagram, they will be asked three summary
questions about their partners’ papers.
- Encourage students to share comments, advice, and praise. Students should
interact with one another while completing the review.
- Once all students have had a chance to complete the peer review activity,
gather students and respond to any questions about the project.
- Note that
the Venn Diagram gives a snapshot of the underlying relationships of the
narrative.
If there
are few
details
on
the diagram, the narrative probably needs more specifics.
- Discuss the final format for the narratives: stories should be printed so
that the three voices are clear. You can use the format from Momaday’s
book, the format used in the
student models by Wright and
by Ikeda,
or another format. If color printers are available, you might use different
colors for each section, as in the Model
Response to Literature. You could also choose specific fonts for the different
sections (e.g., the myth section uses Times, the interview section uses Arial
or Helvetica, and the personal connection section uses Comic Sans Serif). By
choosing your format as a group, you ensure that the assembled class anthology
is consistent.
- Students can continue revising their narratives during the remaining class
session and for homework.
- Students should print two copies of their stories (one for the class anthology
and one for you to respond to). Students should submit peer review comments,
notes, and drafts along with the final copies.
Extension
Students can place their stories on hyperlinked Web pages, as an online anthology.
See the Web Resources below for sample sites.
Web Resources
- N. Scott Momaday (Kiowa) (b. 1934)
http://www.georgetown.edu/faculty/bassr/heath/syllabuild/iguide/momaday.html
- Short overview of the book, touching on themes, form, and structure.
- N.
Scott Momaday, Ph.D
http://www.achievement.org/autodoc/page/mom0pro-1
- The Academy of Achievement includes a profile and biography of the author
as well as an interview and photo gallery.
- The Way to Rainy Mountain, from Annenberg/CPB's The Expanding Canon
http://www.learner.org/channel/workshops/hslit/session6/aw/work1.html
- Excellent details on Momaday's text, including details on key references.
- Student Assignments on The Way to Rainy Mountain
- Patricia Schulze’s
students’ The Way To Rainy Mountain projects
http://www.pschulze.com/subweb/rainy/
Carla
Beard's adaptation
http://www.fayette.k12.in.us/~cbeard/momaday/
Patricia
Schulze’s adaptation of Carla’s adaptation
http://ps044.k12.sd.us/rainy_mountain.htm
- The Power of Kiowa Song:
A Collaborative Ethnography
http://www.uapress.arizona.edu/lib/cache/excerpts/kiowa/kiowasng.htm
- Students can listen to a recordings of a variety of Kiowa songs on this site,
which also includes brief details on the songs and when they are typically
sung.
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| Student Assessment/Reflections |
Ask students to complete the Individual
Reflective Assessment for self-evaluation of the project.
Use the three-voice
rubric to evaluate the final project. Additionally, you can check
peer review comments, notes, and drafts to note students’ progress over
the course of the project.
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1 - Students read a wide range of print and nonprint texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and nonfiction, classic and contemporary works.
3 - Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies, and their understanding of textual features (e.g., sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics).
4 - Students adjust their use of spoken, written, and visual language (e.g., conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes.
5 - Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes.
6 - Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g., spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language, and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and nonprint texts.
7 - Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions, and by posing problems. They gather, evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources (e.g., print and nonprint texts, artifacts, people) to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience.
8 - Students use a variety of technological and information resources (e.g., libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge.
11 - Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative, and critical members of a variety of literacy communities.
12 - Students use spoken, written, and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g., for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information).
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