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| Overview |
Teenagers are often outspoken and opinionated. Writing reviews
of the literature they read gives them a chance to express their ideas while
developing style and voice. After examining samples of movie, music, restaurant,
and book reviews, students devise guidelines for writing interesting and informative
reviews. They then produce their own reviews of the literature they’re reading
in class—and compare their ideas and their pieces with the work of published reviewers.
Though this lesson is illustrated with examples from student
and professional reviews of Raymond Carver’s writing, the techniques can be
used with whatever literature students are reading.
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| From Theory to Practice |
While it’s important for students to learn to read and evaluate critical
commentary,
“Each reader has a right—and even a responsibility—to form
his or her own
opinions, based on that reader’s reading and understanding of a piece of
literature,
and to be able to support those opinions with solid reasons” (97).
When
students express ideas on an author’s work that are also noted by critics,
“it presents a perfect opportunity to introduce critical commentary naturally
into class discussion in order to promote a deeper understanding of the literature” (100).
Further Reading
Rubenstein, Susanne. 2005. Raymond
Carver in the Classroom: “A Small, Good Thing.” Urbana: NCTE.
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| Student Objectives |
Students will
- read a variety of different kinds of reviews.
- determine the qualities and characteristics of an effective review.
- use critical thinking skills to formulate their own opinions about a writer’s work.
- apply their knowledge to write their own reviews.
- compare their ideas and their work to that of professional reviewers.
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| Instructional Plan |
Resources
Preparation
- Collect a variety of reviews, from both online and print
resources, to supplement those that students will contribute.
As you gather these resources, be sure that you locate:
- two conflicting reviews of a current movie, television
show, or CD with which students are likely familiar.
- reviews specific to the writer(s) who students are
reading. (See Web Resources for help in obtaining these
reviews.)
- Make appropriate number of copies of handouts.
- Test the ReadWriteThink
Printing Press on
your computers to familiarize yourself with the tool and ensure that you have
the Flash plug-in installed. You can download the plug-in
from the technical support page.
Instruction and Activities
Session One
- In this first class session, work to generate interest in writing a review—and
to convince students that they do have strong and valid opinions.
- Begin by asking students what they thought of yesterday’s cafeteria
lunch or last night’s sitcom. Encourage them to be specific, using questions
such as the following to guide discussion:
- If lunch was “gross,” what made it so?
- If the show was “really funny,” why did it make them laugh?
- Ask students why they go to certain movies, buy specific CDs, or choose
to eat in particular restaurants. Encourage them to explore where they get
their “recommendations” from.
- Invite students to share both positive and negative experiences they have had as a result of listening to someone else’s opinion.
- Lead the discussion to a point where students begin to see that word-of-mouth recommendations and published reviews essentially serve the same purpose: to comment on and evaluate a work or an event.
- Share two conflicting reviews with students .
- As a class, students should note:
- the kind of information included in both reviews.
- the specific points the reviewers agree and disagree about.
- any differences in focus between the reviews.
- which review is more entertaining—and why.
- which review is more convincing—and why.
- Ask students to list various kinds of reviews and to suggest where they
can find these reviews (newspapers, magazines, journals, and online).
- For homework, ask each student bring one to three reviews to class.
Session Two
- In this second session, focus on helping students determine the qualities
and characteristics of a good review.
- In groups of three or four, ask students to share the reviews they collected
as homework, compiling a list of features that are evident in each review.
These include:
- the name of what is being reviewed
- a clear statement of the reviewer’s opinion (i.e., a thesis)
- specific examples that support the reviewer’s opinion
- a particular tone (use of humor, sarcasm, authority, etc.).
- Students should also note differences seen in reviews of various types, such
as the following:
- book reviews may include quotations from the work.
- restaurant reviews may discuss atmosphere.
- both music and literary reviews may trace developments in the writer/musician’s history.
- Each small group should choose one review to read to the class along with
their own short oral analysis.
- As a conclusion to the activity, the class as a whole should compile a
list on the board or on chart paper of qualities that contribute to a good
review.
If desired, share the Review Components handout, which reviews the parts of a
review.
- The teacher should collect all reviews students brought in for homework for use in future sessions.
Session Three
- In this third session, work to get students
to focus on the particular attributes of a book review in preparation for writing
their
own reviews of the literature they’re reading.
- Ideally, the teacher should have a selection of book reviews from those
collected from students the previous day. In case students have not brought
in book reviews, the teacher should have such reviews available. These reviews
should be carefully chosen so that their content is accessible to students.
It’s best if some reviews focus on works students may have read while
others are of work unfamiliar to students.)
- In small groups of three or four, have students examine a book review
and break it down into its components to determine how the introduction, the
body, and the conclusion allow the writer to make his/her points.
- Next, students should examine the particular style of their group’s
review and determine how the writer achieves a unique voice. Each group should
try to determine the tone of their review (i.e., pompous and authoritative,
humorous, enthusiastic, analytical, etc.) by noting such things as word choice,
sentence structure, and use of detail. If students have collected reviews written
by the same reviewer, these “elusive” qualities may be easier to
spot.
- Invite a class discussion about how a review combines the informative aspects of straight journalism with the “pizzazz” of personal narrative.
- Finally guide students to consider the importance of audience by asking questions
such as the following:
- Where did your review appear?
- What do you know about this publication?
- Who do you think the audience for this publication would be?
- What would a reader who had read the book take from the review?
- What would a reader unfamiliar with the book take from the review?
(Note: It’s important for students to recognize that the reviewer never
wants to spoil the work for the reader by giving away too much!)
- By the end of the session, ask students to compile a class list of broad,
basic guidelines for writing a review. Example guidelines are also available.
- Now that students have looked critically at reviews, they are ready to start writing their own review.
- Invite students to begin writing the first draft of a review based on the particular piece(s) of literature the class is studying.
- If students are reading one book, that one work would be the focus of the review.
- If students are reading more than one work (i.e., a number of short stories,
poems, or essays) by an author, the review can cover any or all of this
material.
- Ask students to design a rating system to include with the written review.
The system can be as traditional as 1-5 stars or something more creative.
- As with all writing, students use the process approach in writing this review. Portions of class periods will be spent in response and revision with the teacher determining how much additional guidance is needed.
NOTE: Older students tend to get the style and tone of a review quite
quickly, while younger students often produce something more like a book
report
in the early drafts. Writing instruction should be geared to the ability
of each class.
- Use the Reviewer Checklist as a guide to help students draft and edit their reviews.
Session Four
- In this fourth session, introduce critical commentary into class discussion.
- When the students have completed their reviews, invite them to publish their reviews using one of the options on the ReadWriteThink Printing Press. Print them when they are complete.
- With their final drafts complete, have students read professionally
written reviews on the same text and compare their ideas as well as their
writing to these reviews. Depending on the accessibility of these reviews,
you can collect all published material or students
can be assigned this task. (It’s for this reason that this aspect of
the assignment works best if the writers reviewed are contemporary.)
- When comparing their reviews with the published pieces, students should
find points that are raised in both. This process demystifies critical
commentary and allows students to feel comfortable discussing the work of reviewers.
For example, one
of my students writes of his appreciation of Carver’s “deadpan
humor.”
- Teachers can use such excerpts to generate lively classroom discussion.
If desired, use the this
suggestion for creating
a classroom discussion.
- After all students have reacted to each excerpt, invite the class to break
into pairs or small groups, with each group responsible for sifting through
the material on one of the papers.
- Finally, have students present conclusions based on their peers’ responses
to the critical commentary.
Extensions
- Reviews are meant to be published, with the material and opinions shared
with an interested audience. Possible publishing options include:
- a classroom bulletin board displaying reviews, accompanied by artwork
and photographs of the authors.
- a class publication with all reviews collected in a booklet, brochure,
or binder and saved for future classes who will be studying the same author.
This collection can be added to over the years to create an “historical
perspective” on a particular works/authors.
- submissions to print and online publications that seek reviews. (Note:
Teen Ink seeks student written reviews on all topics.)
- When students are comfortable with discussing shorter pieces of critical commentary, they can participate in other focused activities involving analysis of entire reviews. Such activities include:
- writing an individual response to a review to then share with the class.
- revising and rewriting their own original reviews to address points raised by the professional reviewer.
- working with a partner and each taking a side in response to a review, with one student proving the reviewer is “right” and the other proving him/her “wrong."
- When students are comparing different types of reviews, invite them to use the Venn Diagram Tool.
Web Resources
- ReadWriteThink Printing Press
http://interactives.mped.org/ppress110.aspx
- This online tool offers a way for students to compile book reviews in a
reader-friendly format.
- Write a Book Review with Rodman Philbrick
http://teacher.scholastic.com/writewit/bookrev/
- This site breaks down the process of writing a book review with step-by-step
instruction.
- Finding Book Reviews –Stauffer Library Reference
http://library.queensu.ca/research/guide/book-reviews
- This site offers instruction in writing reviews and a reference component to access a wide variety of reviews.
- Book Reviews in the Yahoo! Directory
http://dir.yahoo.com/Arts/Humanities/Literature/Reviews
- This site has links to an extensive selection of reviews, particularly reviews of contemporary works.
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| Student Assessment/Reflections |
- Grade the review as a complete writing assignment.
- As students write and revise their reviews, guide their work with the Reviewer
Checklist, a
worksheet that outlines the vital features of a good review and asks students
to verify that their
final review includes these specific features. This checklist can be used
by the teacher in evaluating the review.
- Students can assess their own work and learning by completing a reflection
sheet that is handed in with the review. As with all reflection sheets,
the form should include 4–5 questions that make writers really
think about their pieces and the process that led to their creation.
- Publish student reviews using one of the options listed above to provide
further feedback and assessment for students.
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1 - Students read a wide range of print and nonprint texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and nonfiction, classic and contemporary works.
3 - Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies, and their understanding of textual features (e.g., sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics).
4 - Students adjust their use of spoken, written, and visual language (e.g., conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes.
5 - Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes.
6 - Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g., spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language, and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and nonprint texts.
7 - Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions, and by posing problems. They gather, evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources (e.g., print and nonprint texts, artifacts, people) to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience.
8 - Students use a variety of technological and information resources (e.g., libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge.
9 - Students develop an understanding of and respect for diversity in language use, patterns, and dialects across cultures, ethnic groups, geographic regions, and social roles.
12 - Students use spoken, written, and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g., for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information).
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