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| Overview |
Alienation is an important theme in contemporary literature, and it’s an
idea that adolescents need to confront in order to fully understand what it means
to be a human being in our modern world. This activity, based on the art
of Edward Hopper and combined with fiction by Raymond Carver, allows students
to explore the idea of alienation while tapping into their creative talents as
they learn to create vivid characters through voice. Students write powerful
monologues that express the loneliness that pervades modern society. This work
is especially appealing to visual learners who can read paintings as well as
pages.
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| From Theory to Practice |
By combining fiction by Raymond Carver and paintings by
Edward Hopper, this lesson plan helps “students understand . . . the essential
sense of alienation in contemporary life that, paradoxically, connects us all.
In doing this, [Carver and Hopper give] teachers and students a place to begin
discussion of what it means to be a human being in our modern world, and there
begins the development of empathy” (30). The process begins
by exploring the stories behind the images depicted in
the paintings by Edward Hopper. “These paintings
give students a strong visual portrayal of the same people, places, and
emotions that Carver captures in his fiction” (31). The technique is at
once both simple and sophisticated:
“So,” I say to my students, “tell us their stories [behind
these paintings]. Is the couple fighting? About to break up? Who’s the man
who sits alone? Should we fear him? Or tell us what the woman at the window in
Brooklyn is thinking, or why the two restaurant patrons seem so distant, as if
they’re in two different universes. Create their stories, or maybe write
their monologues. Give use the truth of their world” (31).
This world of make-believe may seem an easy one to
enter, but what students discover as they attempt to break through the windows
that Hopper often puts his characters behind is that in order to write realistic
stories, they have to penetrate not only glass walls but human walls as well.
Hopper’s people, like Carver’s, tell us only so much; they leave
us to fill in the spaces and to bring to the story our own experiences and
feelings as human beings in an increasingly complex, and often cold, world.
Many of the characteristics of minimalist fiction—from the coolly realistic
settings to the aching but unexpressed emotion, from the comfortable familiarity
of common characters and brand names . . . to the menacing undercurrent of
mystery, from the immediacy of the present scene to the unresolved ambiguity
of its outcome—are reflected in Hopper’s paintings. As they create
lives for Hopper’s subjects, students, especially visual learners,
can find another door into Carver’s world.
Further Reading
Rubenstein, Susanne. Raymond
Carver in the Classroom “A Small, Good Thing”. Urbana: NCTE, 2005.
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| Student Objectives |
Students will
- examine the art of Edward Hopper and discuss the themes of his work.
- analyze the design of a monologue and consider how voice reveals character.
- apply their knowledge to write their own monologues.
- compare their writing to the voices of characters in Carver’s stories.
- develop an understanding of the concept of alienation in terms of contemporary literature.
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| Instructional Plan |
Resources
Preparation
- Collect samples
of Edward Hopper’s art. A number of Hopper’s paintings
are available online or through slides; however, it is often more effective
to give students a physical copy
to hold and examine as they work. For that reason, art prints, pages from an
Edward Hopper calendar, or even Hopper postcards work particularly well.
- Choose the specific paintings that students will use for their monologues.
Six paintings are available in the Travelogues, if online paintings are the
best option for your class.
- Obtain copies of
Raymond Carver stories that will be read.
- Familiarize yourself with biographical material on Hopper and Carver. Online resources are listed below in Web Resources. Additional information on Carver is found in Chapter One “Where Life and Art Intersect” in Raymond Carver in the Classroom “A Small, Good Thing” by Susanne Rubenstein (NCTE, 2005).
- Prepare copies of Reflection sheet for students’ self-assessment.
- Test the Painting Travelogues (links above in the Resources) on your computers
to familiarize yourself with the tools and ensure that you have the Flash plug-in
installed. You can download the plug-in from the technical
support page.
Instruction and Activities
Session One
- Explain that this session will focus on exploring
Hopper’s
paintings and beginning to consider what Hopper is trying
to express in his art.
- Hang pieces of Hopper’s art around the room and ask students to move
from painting to painting, writing down quick first impressions of the works.
Ask them to consider the overall mood, the use of color, the interplay of light
and dark, their sense of the situation that is depicted, and so forth.
- Ask students to share their reactions to the paintings. Generally students
use certain words over and over again, describing Hopper’s figures as sad,
isolated, cut off, desperate, distant.
- Ask students to talk about his use
of windows as ways to “see in,” but also “to cut off.”
- Guide
students to think about Hopper’s use of shadows and pools of light.
- Encourage them to share their ideas about the situations the characters
are in (i.e.“her
husband has left her,” “she’s leaving home,” “he’s
done something bad and feels guilty.) Often students offer a
series of scenarios that reflect characters feeling enormous loss and loneliness.
- Allow students to form small groups of three to four, with each group
choosing one particular painting to focus on. If desired, ask students to
choose one of the paintings included in the Travelogues.
- Tell students that
their ultimate goal will be to write a monologue in the voice of the figure
in the painting. If more than one figure is in the painting, the
group should decide which will be the subject.
- Ask students to brainstorm everything they can about the character. Use
one of the Travelogues to guide students’ explorations of the images;
or use the
Questions
for Exploring an Edward Hopper Painting handout, which asks
them the following questions:
- Write down any words or images that you connect to the character.
- Write down any phrases that you can imagine the character speaking
or thoughts that you can imagine the character thinking.
- Why is the character speaking? Whom is the character speaking to?
- Where is the character now? What is happening to her right now?
- What has happened to the character in the past?
- What other thoughts
come to mind when you think about the character in the painting?
- Encourage each group to amass
material which they can then sift through in order to choose the most interesting
and appropriate ideas.
Session Two
- Ask students what they know about monologues. Students with dramatic experience
will likely talk about dramatic performances. Most students are familiar with
monologues in Shakespeare’s work. Others understand the concept of monologue
from late night shows like David Letterman or stand-up comedians. Suggest
to students that they might have even been the unwelcome recipient of a monologue
from a stranger in a waiting room or on the street!
- Guide students to develop a definition of monologue that includes the following ideas:
- It is spoken in the first person.
- There is an implied listener/audience.
- Through the monologue the character
reveals his/her nature/personality.
- Through the monologue the character
reveals facts about his/her situation.
- The character’s “voice” (vocabulary,
diction, pacing, etc.) communicates c and d.
- Ask each group to use the material generated in the previous class session,
and make decisions about what they believe should be part of the written monologue.
- Begin first draft writing through a collaborative group effort.
Session Three
- Tell each group to pair up with another group and share its monologue. The
responding group should offer positive comments as well as suggestions for
improvement with the focus on the voice of the character and the clarity of
the character’s situation.
- Direct both groups to note the similarities in their monologues in terms
of character and situation and use of particular words.
- Ask groups to be prepared to share
these comparisons with the entire class after the response period.
- Tell students to use response material to continue revising and rewriting
their monologues until they reach a final draft stage.
- Determine with student
input how much additional time is need for completion, and allow additional
class sessions if necessary.
Session Four
- Ask each group, one after another, to read its final monologue with no discussion
in between. This sort of “choral reading” allows students to hear
vividly the connections among the characters and to appreciate how powerfully
Hopper’s works express the idea of alienation.
- After the reading
is complete, ask students to discuss how Hopper achieves this theme in his
paintings. This discussion also offers an excellent opportunity for the “artists” in
the class to share their special expertise.
- Following this discussion,
either introduce students to the work of Raymond Carver (see list of
selected stories) or, if students have already read Carver, ask them
to think back to the stories they have read.
- Guide students
to see how both artist and writer illuminate similar themes through their
work, and how these themes are prevalent in contemporary life. Ask questions
that help students to see that the work of both Hopper and Carver reveals the
loneliness and sense of isolation that seems to be a paradoxical yet inevitable
part of America’s continuing growth and success. For example, the monologue
students create for the character in Hopper’s “Morning Sun” might,
for example, parallel the feelings of the woman whose husband is leaving in
Carver’s story “Little Things,” or perhaps the man in “Sunlight
in a Cafeteria” is like L.D in “One More Thing,” wanting
desperately to speak but at a complete loss for words. Students generally discover
that the language they use in these monologues is also very similar to the
simple, terse, stripped down language of Carver’s fiction, and this allows
teachers to lead students into a discussion of how the minimalist style of
writing best captures the sense of alienation in modern culture.
Extensions
- As a form of student publication, the monologues can be hung alongside the Hopper art work, almost in a “museum” design.
- Edward Hopper’s paintings can also be used in conjunction with the
work of other writers. Among the possibilities are the following:
- Hopper’s Nighthawks is often connected to Hemingway’s short story “The Killers,” originally published in Scribner’s Magazine in March 1927. Some believe that Hemingway’s story, the tale of two hired gunmen who wait for their prey to enter a diner, may have inspired Nighthawks.
- Two works edited by Hopper scholar Gail Levin, The Poetry of Solitude: A
Tribute to Edward Hopper and Silent Places: A Tribute to Edward
Hopper, offer fascinating literary connections to Hopper’s
work. The first is a collection of poems about Hopper’s work and
includes poems by Joyce Carol Oates, John Updike, and Stephen Dunn among
others. The second presents excerpts from fiction that make reference
to Hopper’s art with accompanying images and includes such writers
as Stuart Dybek, Lawrence Block and Michael Connelly.
- Levin, Gail, ed. The Poetry of Solitude:A Tribute to Edward Hopper. New York: Universe Publishing, 1995.
- Levin Gail, ed. Silent Places: A Tribute to Edward Hopper. New York: Universe Publishing, 2000.
Web Resources
- Edward Hopper Scrapbook
http://nmaa-ryder.si.edu/collections/exhibits/hopper/
- This site, through the Smithsonian American Art Museum, offers an Edward
Hopper Scrapbook, which includes biographical information, reproductions
of paintings, and various artifacts from Hopper’s life.
- Present at the Creation: Edward Hopper's Nighthawks, from NPR
http://www.npr.org/programs/morning/features/patc/nighthawks/
- This National Public Radio site tells the story of one of Hopper’s
most famous works. The site includes text and audio files, which include
recordings of Hopper talking about his works.
- Hopper, Edward
http://www.ibiblio.org/wm/paint/auth/hopper/
- The WebMuseum site provides basic biographical information and links to many of his paintings.
- Carver:
The Raymond Carver Web Site
http://www.whitman.edu/english/carver/carver.cgi
- This site offers a wealth of information on Raymond Carver’s life and
his writing.
- Audio Interviews
with Raymond Carver
http://wiredforbooks.org/raymondcarver/
- In this 1983 interview with Don Swaim, Carver discusses his writing and his
life, including his struggles with alcoholism.
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| Student Assessment/Reflections |
The teacher can grade each monologue as a complete writing assignment with each group member receiving the same grade because it is a collaborative effort.
Another approach, however, is to also ask each student to turn in an individual
Reflection Sheet and include that response
as part of the individual grade or as a separate grade entirely.
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1 - Students read a wide range of print and nonprint texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and nonfiction, classic and contemporary works.
3 - Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies, and their understanding of textual features (e.g., sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics).
4 - Students adjust their use of spoken, written, and visual language (e.g., conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes.
5 - Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes.
6 - Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g., spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language, and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and nonprint texts.
7 - Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions, and by posing problems. They gather, evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources (e.g., print and nonprint texts, artifacts, people) to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience.
8 - Students use a variety of technological and information resources (e.g., libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge.
9 - Students develop an understanding of and respect for diversity in language use, patterns, and dialects across cultures, ethnic groups, geographic regions, and social roles.
11 - Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative, and critical members of a variety of literacy communities.
12 - Students use spoken, written, and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g., for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information).
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