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Helpful Information for the Can You Convince Me? Crossword Puzzle
Looking for a little help? This persuasive essay was written by a second grader. See if you are convinced and look for clues to help you solve the puzzle. You'll be an argument expert in no time!
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This student is trying to persuade, or convince, his parents that he needs a new bike.
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I Want a New Bike
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If I had a new bike I would have more fun. Wouldn't you be happier if you were having fun? I would. I'll tell you three reasons why I should have a new bike.
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The highlighted sentence is this student's claim. He is stating that he has three reasons to get a new bike.
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This is this student's first reason or argument for getting a new bike.
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If I had a new bike, I would have a softer landing when I jumped my ramp. My old bike has a plastic seat. My new bike would have a padded seat. Without a soft landing, jumping off the ramp hurts. I just saw on a commercial that the bike I want is on sale, but the sale is going to end this week. If you want to get me a bike at a good deal, this is the time to do it. That's one reason why I think I should have a new bike.
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A commercial is a TV ad that tries to get you to buy something.
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This bike is on sale. The student is trying to build a sense of urgency. He wants his parents to buy the bike NOW! This is an example of kairos. |
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Danny Parks is a big name and gives weight to this student's argument.
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Next, if I had a new bike I could do tricks. If I practice my tricks like Pro BMX Freestyle Rider Danny Parks, I'll be a pro. If I become a pro, then I'll have a good job. Danny Parks has been riding BMX bikes for about 20 years and has gotten jobs at the Gravity Games, X Games, and as a writer for ESPN. Since I will have a good job I'll become rich. Now, that's a great reason to buy me a new bike.
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Using research is one way to make your argument more convincing.
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If I had a new bike I would not play my Xbox as much. Some studies have shown that kids that play too many video games might fight more or not do as well in school. I would spend my afternoons riding my new bike with my friends and that would be much healthier. Just riding my bike for 2 hours a day would make me healthier and stronger.
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Logos is using numbers or facts to support your claim.
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This student is trying to make himself sound trustworthy to his parents. This is an example of Ethos.
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Finally, if you buy the bike I want, I will do extra chores this summer. I know that it's important to work hard for the things that you want, and I plan to show you that I can work hard for this bike. I gave you three reasons, but my fourth reason is that I will be VERY HAPPY!
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Now, the student is appealing to his parents' emotions. Every parent wants their kids to be happy. This is called Pathos.
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